please help.


FailingI tried to write something beautiful, But Im sure I tried in vain. I tried to write something memorable, But all I wrote was pain.Failing
I tried to write a sonnet, A love song to serenade, But sweetness doesnt come easily And I fear that I have failed.
And you were so good, And you were so smart, So funny, so witty, so nice, And I wanted to give you All of my heart, But the words just wouldnt flow right.
I would have loved to try to love you, As much as you deserve But faced with the whiteness of the page I lo


grievingI miss you. I walked to the beach today and stood barefoot on the cold sandgrieving
and missed you. The waves rolled out, grey and uneasy and i felt so alone.
The man in the shop was different this time. He smiled I waited inside A couple already sat on the hard plastic chairs under the umbrella.
I should have cried out into the wind like you said But the wind stopped So i sat like a stone in the stillness until it was too cold.
The streets, the houses, the grass all looks the same but feels so empty. It's not fair, it doesn't belong to you
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'You know what the trouble about real life is? There's no danger music' - Jim Carrey =b
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please forgive the lateness of my reply
how're you? who're you?
it's funny that both of those are anagrams of the word 'whore'....i only found that the other day...how odd..
mmmm, i'm Thaddeus, Thaddeus Swordthrow, pleased to make your acquaintance!
so back to my question, who are you?
i see you like the baker sisters...which i completely understand...but i have no idea of your gender..so i can't visualise a voice or tone for comments and such....
hmm......yes, so i hear you like poetry, which makes me smile, because i call myself an aspiring poet, so i'd very much love to have a new friend on deviantart much like yourself...
mmm
i see you like P1pp1N's poem 'failing'....that's good
no no, it's a great poem...marvellous...
mmmm, i'm quite fond of it too....oh, btw, i'm DOR14N's little sister's little sister's friend.....
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to err is human. to forgive, divine
"what is the answer to this question?"
I'm ok now, not sure how i was when you posed that question on the 29/12/2008 if that's what you wanted to know. Not too sure who i am either, i'm not being overly helpful am i now?
i am pleased to make your acquaintance also. I do like bakers but honestly i have a soft spot for candlestickmakers, just haven't met any of those to harass this lifetime, so the search continues. M.
We'll be friends forever.
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please forgive the lateness of my reply
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"My soul melteth for heaviness: strengthen thou me according unto thy word."-Psalm 119:28
mayhaps i will provide some constructive criticism soon but 5 months seems hardly long enough to formulate 'ideas', i will meditate some more
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"My soul melteth for heaviness: strengthen thou me according unto thy word."-Psalm 119:28
i accidentally wrote moving to le coats. mm coats!
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'donnez-toi...'
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'donnez-toi...'
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